写作模板之“爱心俱乐部
假如你是田田, 安徽省某中学的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部,请根据下面表格内容,用英语写一封自荐信。
姓名 田田 性别 女
本人特点身体健康;学习刻苦;乐于助人;与同学友好相处。
“爱心”表现
1.每一天帮助班级有残疾的同学上下楼梯。
2.在上学的路上经常给公共汽车上的老人让座。
3.在父母生日时购买礼物。
加入目的: 自由发挥
Possible vision:
May 11, 2012
Dear Mr Ma;
I’m a 12-year-old schoolgirl whose name is Tian Tian, I’m a powerful person full of energy. I work hard, I am always helping others ,as the headmaster says : “Tian Tian is really a living Lei Feng, she is an inspiration to the whole school." With my help, the disabled student can go upstairs or downstairs easily.Of course ,I am easy to get along with ,,On my way to school, I usually offer my seat to the old, using presents I show my love to parents on their birthdays
If I joined the Helping Hands Club, I would pass on my love to more people in need.
Waiting for your early reply!
Your Sincerely
Tian Tian
写作指导:
1.正文第一句还可写成I’m a 12-year-old schoolgirl studying in Anhui Middle School 其中–ing 分词短语作定语修饰schoolgirl。
2.Always 与进行体连用,表达说话人带有一定的感情色彩(赞扬)
3.表扬某人的话,可套用教科书 Go for it 九年级 P 122 “Amy is an inspiration to us all。
4.帮助某人可选用 help sb(to)do sth, help sb with sth 本文使用了with one’s help =with the help of sb
5.让座位 offer seats to sb provide my seat for the old provide the old with my seat
6.Using presents的语言点系湘教版九年级教科书内容,在人教新目标Unit 1 中,Page 6 ,I started to write my own original sentences using the grammar I was learning 。
7.加入目的, 可采用非真实条件句(虚拟语气)当然也可用If I were a member of Helping Hands Club , I would pass on my love to more people in need.。
8申请的结束也可用 Looking forward to hearing from you,收信人读信时,写信人正在盼望。
9书信的结尾要签名,须知英文书信是用电脑打印的。
(试题来源于 九年级二轮复习练习题)
作者简介
马敬杰 中学高级教师。已发表论文《初识虚拟语气》(中知网收录)见《中学英语园地》九年级版09年10期;《“程序化”转换被动语态》,见《英语学习辅导》高一版02年7.8合刊;英语写作指导稿件《田田自荐信》见《学英语》新目标九年级版09年8期;演讲稿“To be a greener person”(《做个更环保的人》)见《英语画刊》(国家级)高一、高二综合版09年5期,指导学生发表“Doing a good deed”(〈〈做好事〉〉),文见〈〈英语画刊〉〉(国家级)初三版03年4期;“Gone with the Rain”(〈〈随雨而逝〉〉),文见〈〈英语学习辅导〉〉初三版01年10期.散文《一个真实的我》(“A true teacher ---Ma Jingjie”) 《那天,我们去赭山 》等见《蒙城教育网》散文《父亲》见《文学微刊》周日作家专栏2018.02.25期