高考书面表达应试技巧与策略
安徽 舒城中学 姚锋
高考英语的书面表达分值为25分，要求词数在120字左右，要在这么短的篇幅内写出高质量的短文，不仅需要考生具有较好的语言知识，而且还应具备一定的答题技巧与方法。惟有如此，才能写出高分“作文”而立于不败之地。
高考的书面表达最注重的是表达，而不是思想内容或格式。因此主要考察学生们对英语基本语言知识的实际运用能力。我个人认为考察下面三个方面：
1．语言考察是第一位。它要求学生们的表达要有“洋味”，即流畅，自然，得体，词汇多样，语法结构丰富。
2．内容考察是第二位。所列要点必须齐全无遗漏，细节信息可适当增加。
3．语法正确是第三位。考生应力求表达时语法正确，避免发生如主谓不一至、单复数方面的语法错误。
那么，针对以上的高考的考察要求，怎样在高考的考场上写出一篇高分“作文”？在实际操作中，我认为拥有一定的答题技巧会帮助你事半功倍。下面针对2013年安徽省高考英语作文谈谈我的做法：
一、谋篇布篇，结构清晰。
首先需要全面细心地审题，正确理解和把握题目要求以及情景需要，确定好对整个篇章结构的布局，每一部分的内容所占的比例了然于心。
开头部分opening ——— 说出文中要叙说的中心情景需要。如在开头就不文明现象作一简要交代，然后指出其危害性，进而突出主题----讲文明十分重要。 Nowadays it is not uncommon to witness some bad behaviors in our daily life, like breaking traffic rules, spitting and littering, which do serious harm to our life and the environment. In order to change this situation, it is of great significance for each of us to take immediate action from now on. As for me, it should start on the way to school.
正文部分 body ——— 围绕主题开展叙述或讨论。上学路上，在遵守交通法规等方面我是怎样具体注意举止文明的。I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible。
结尾部分 conclusion ——— 对全文进行总结和概括。In conclusion, I sincerely hope my behavior will make a difference.
二、巧用衔接手段，注意上下文的连贯性。
正确使用过渡词或过渡句是最常用的手段。它使文章结构严谨，层次分明，条理清楚，连贯流畅，富有节奏。诸如参考范文中like ,in order to , As for me, Meanwhile，In conclusion等的使用，就起到了这样的作用。
三、确定主题句（紧扣主题适当发挥）围绕所给情景，在合乎情理，合乎规范，力所能及的前提下添加。
先根据写作要求，列出你要写的文章的要点，然后从中提炼出一句有概括性的话，即文章主题句。主题句应力求句子完整，语法正确，具有吸引力和可读性。It is of great significance for each of us to take immediate action from now on.
主题句仅仅是文章的主旨和大意，要使文章变得有血有肉，就要展开主题句，并考虑如何组织安排语句，用一些衔接手段使句子与句子，语段与语段之间建立起各种各样的语意关系，并使每个语篇在意义上具有连贯性。As for me, it should start on the way to school. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible。
四、文末结论，首尾呼应。
文章的结尾常用来概括全文内容，进一步强调肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表述得更加明晰，深刻。In conclusion, I sincerely hope my behavior will make a difference.
五、句式富有变化，词汇丰富多变。如参考范文中的it is not uncommon to witness… ，In order to change this situation, it is of great significance… ， If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep… ， Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also… ， whenever possible 等。
六、卷面整洁，清晰美观。因为现在都是网上阅卷，所以，卷面的整洁清晰程度就显的尤其重要，千万不要字迹潦草或严重修改。
七、语句正确，检查无拼写、冠词、人称、数，标点、大小写、时态、语态等方面的错误。
总之，在日常训练中，一定要注意积累丰富的语言知识，并且在语篇结构上多做训练，那么你的书面表达中就会有很多亮点和得分点，就会令阅卷老师眼睛为之一亮，对你的文章刮目相看。
附：2013年安徽省高考英语作文：
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括：
1.遵守交通法规；
2.注意举止文明。
注意：
1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考范文
Nowadays it is not uncommon to witness some bad behaviors in our daily life, like breaking traffic rules, spitting and littering, which do serious harm to our life and the environment. In order to change this situation, it is of great significance for each of us to take immediate action from now on.
As for me, it should start on the way to school. I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.
In conclusion, I sincerely hope my behavior will make a difference.
